Rhetorical Study
"She was overcome all at once by a need to touch him, as if she could not believe in him, or would not remember him, without it. Exhausted, hardly knowing what she was doing, she came the last three steps and sat, took the man in her arms, actually held him, gazing out of her smudged eyes down the stairs, back into the morning. She felt wetness against her breast and saw that he was crying again. He hardly breathed but tears came as if being pumped. 'I can't help,' she whispered, rocking him, 'I can't help.' It was already too many miles to Fresno... 'Ramirez,; she cried. The arthritic looked around on his rusty neck. 'He's going to die,' she said. 'Who isn't?'" Pg 102-104
When this passage occurs, Oedipa has stumbled upon an old man linked to the Trystero who's last wish is to have a letter delivered to his wife. The moment allows Oedipa to, for once, let in few emotions that she has managed to block out before. She seems to detach herself out of getting hurt, which is why this moment is so perfectly characterized for her. The way that Pynchon uses imagery to describe how the moment in all its simplicity is very unlike his style of writing, which is why it stuck out so much for me. Words like "wetness" and "arthritic," help the reader visualize the way these people behave and almost captures their aura. I particularly like how Pynchon says that she had to take a few steps towards the man and how she "actually held him" because it almost shows the emotional steps Oedipa needs to take to come close to another human being.
Then, right after this emotional scene, Oedipa kind of sits back and talks to the man who is supposed to be taking care of the other man and her emotions are thrown right back in her face. I think that this is very satirical and also extremely realistic. Ramirez does not care that she has made an emotional breathrough, or that the old man has a final wish, he just figures, he's going to die and that is that. I feel like most people say and do these kinds of things, because mourning over people and letting your hopes go is much easier than feeling things. Pynchon is making the same criticism about people because Ramirez should care more. After having spent several months with the old man, taking care of him and leading him around town, he should have some kind of emotional connection, right? But maybe that is why he is actually distancing himself, is because he does not want to be too close and feel that sorrow when the old man does die.











